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    Friday, August 31, 2007

    Flash 55, Take 9

    The pressure was too much to bear.
    She wasn't sure she could stand much more.

    Things had only gotten worse in the last few hours.
    Why didn't she listen to that voice inside her head?33

    She knew better than to do what she had done
    at lunch time.

    NO MORE BEAN SOUP FOR THIS GIRL!

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    13 comments:

    barman said...

    Oh bean soup tastes so good but yikes, it can be so much problems.

    I have to share a camper this weekend. I think I will just pass on the been soup. It just would not be fair.

    Love your 55. It has such a classic sound to it. Oh and do I detect a word count at the end of your second paragraph. Cute. I had to count to 55 three times today. Stop by if you want to see why. It is not the nicest 55 I have done.

    Have a great weekend. Maybe see you tomorrow...

    Mike M said...

    Very good 55!!! I like it

    MONA said...

    Bean soup? I like it!

    Rebicmel said...

    rolfmao girl that is to funny. Just take some Beano next time :) great flash

    lime said...

    lol, i think you've spent too much time with gman! he is affecting you! very cute one!

    Crabby said...

    GASP! are you writing about my gas problem again? LOL!

    Ambre said...

    giggles! That was great!! I just love the endings to these things!!

    ~farrrrrrrrt!~

    Flash said...

    Haha. Shouldn't she still have lik e4 to 6 hours before she starts advancing in chemical warfare???

    S said...

    LMAO....bean soup acckkk!
    I saw the little county thing...you know what, some people have a word counter on their word...but I dont...so I am going to do it your way from now on.

    Sorry Im late PST and all that , you know!

    G-Man said...

    Anybody got a Lighter?

    evalinn said...

    Great 55, have a wonderful weekend!

    The inside of me said...

    OMG, I am laughing so hard I may not be able to control myself. Too much bean soup here too. :)

    Pauline said...

    Great 55, it reminds me of the time I ate nothing but cabbage soup for three days straight. We installed french windows in the resulting hole in the wall lol!