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    Friday, May 16, 2008

    Flash 55, Take 33

    She knew he loved her in his own strange way.

    Why did he spend so much time away from
    his family?

    She missed him when he wasn't there.

    His absence made her grow weary that
    he may be cheating on her.

    She hated that thing that took him away.

    Why does he have to work?


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    G-Man said...

    For someone that never has any ideas, you sure are awesome!!
    You are bright, thoughtful, and very talented...
    I'm never ever bored here!

    Lori said...

    VERY good Jenn! I like it! Not sure I have the creative juices to give it a go but I might... :)

    Mona said...

    LOL! In India we women always call Work "the second wife"! :D

    Well done Jenn!

    James Goodman, Author said...

    ah, that was a sad 55, but well crafted. I hope his work brings him home more often. :D

    snowelf said...

    Wow is this a familiar feeling... just the whole faith in trust thing. It almost feels like freefalling, doesn't it.

    Great 55 Jenn!!


    tnthick said...

    Hello. I happened across your blog while looking for pictures of the reunion. Not sure if you remember me, Jeanenne. It was fun to see the "group" picture, even though I was a bit surprised not to recognize very many people. I have to say I would have recognized you. You still have the same smile since we were kids. I can almost hear your laugh when I see you face. Funny how those memories stay with us. Randy and I were dissappointed not to be able to come, but we were traveling back to MI the following holiday weekend. I would love to "catch up" and hear stories about everyone back "home". By the way, it was fun to see pictures of S and B on your site. B and I were neighbors growing up. I think of her often and wonder where she is. Please tell both of them and I said hello. E-mail me some time. Jeanenne

    lime said...

    sigh...why indeed.

    Evening said...

    Glad you are feeling better. Being that sick is scary.

    I want to congratulate you on your weight loss success. You have lost an amazing amount of weight. I admire all the effort that has taken.

    Your 55 is very creative. You have it all Jenn, beauty, brains and creativity.


    katie said...

    such a talented writer you are, sign gurl!

    have a great weekend!

    ciara said...

    great 55! i need to stop by more often :)