She wasn't sure she was ready to hear the answer
she was desperately seeking. She had waited so long
to know that her hands were shaking as she fumbled for
her phone.
She could barely contain her nervousness as she heard
the sound of an incoming text.
This was going to change her life forever.
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If you are interested in attempting to write a 55, you can visit here to learn about it.
If you do one, go tell G-Man that you did.
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Thursday, November 13, 2008
Flash 55 ~ Take 54
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OMG!
What did they say????????
Dear Jennifer..
This is Donald Trump..
I'll pay you 1,000,000. dollars a year to be my personal Signgurl..
Great 55 Jenn, thanks for playing, and have a GREAT Week-End.
great 55...this story could be about so many life changing events. i'm up.
Now what was that about I wonder!
i wont to know who it was and what they said!
very nice open ended 55 there, girl!
....and then what happened?!?!?!?!?
Do I sense the beginning of another serial 55? (Don't think G-Man's gonna love that...)
But you're not really gonna just leave us hanging like that are ya?
I feel my heart and tummy a-fluttering right along with you, Sign-babe!
Oh, my God, I have felt this way too many times to count over receiving important answers to important questions in text message conversations.
Before I read the text sometimes, I rub the belly of my little pocket Buddha man.
It calms me.
I think I need to go rub his belly now, because I really hope your text message was what you needed.
xoxo, Sign-babe.
My Goodness, I have to do something about these flutters!
So well written!
Ah!
Flutters!
It's the doctor ... they said you are pregnant!
You have me hooked on this one. Such a powerful thing for just 55 words.
Very nicely done.
I'm loving the suspense! GREAT job, Signgurl! By the other comments, I see we're all in agreement. Well done!
-smarmoofus
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